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    May 28

    MOMENTOS EN LA PLAYA

    SeparadorFloresHawaianas
     
    Tardes soleadas, tumbada
    en la arena. Escuchando
    las olas y viendo crecer
     la marea.
     
    El calor hace estremecer
    todo mi cuerpo. Las olas
    moján mis pies y me
    invaden cientos de versos.
     
    Algunos peces saltan
    en la profundidad del mar.
    Yo imagino ser sirena,
    nado con ellos, me dejo llevar...
     
    El sol empieza a esconderse,
    el mar se encuentra sereno.
    La brisa roza mi cuerpo, y el
    aire se enreda en mi pelo.
     
    La luna dá paso a
    una imagen implacable.
    La belleza del cielo, sus colores,
    hacen de mi un ser vulnerable.
     
    SeparadorFloresHawaianas

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    dejame decirte q me encanta como escribes la manera en la q te inspiras es algo sorprendente me gustaria q me escribieras una poesia q se tratara de dos amates en un carro bajo la lluvia amandose .... me dejas saber aqui te dejo mi email la_chulis_sexypr2006@hotmail.com grax
    Sept. 29
    dejame decirte q me encataa como escribes la manera en la q
    Sept. 29
    Preciosa poesia!!! Otra k tiene muxo futuro Raquel. Te kiero!!!!
    May 29

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